Yintoni cross-rhyme? Cross, umphunga, imvano zifakwe

Bhala imibongo ebutsheni bakhe bezama abaninzi. Abanye bade ukuqhubeka ukuba 'sibandezeleke "lo mdala, zicinga naye owayephila ngexesha Pushkin - imbongi zinetalente elihle. Kodwa ke, ngelishwa, akusoloko into iphuma ngenkxola yabantu, zamani ingabizwa izibongo lokwenyaniso. Nokuba musa ithathele ingqalelo thina umxholo kwiindinyana, elubengezelo imifanekiso zemibongo, ntonje kwicala lobuchwepheshe imveliso ulihlwempu.

ndlela versification

iimeko ezibalulekileyo yokuba art ezinomlinganiselo (rate) kunye isingqisho. Nangona into yokuba namhlanje kukho ubunzima usiko oluthile, apho imigca ashiye ngokupheleleyo nokuba abaphumeleli indiva Izicengcelezo kulinganiswa isantya kunye nesingqisho xa versification. Umzekelo yale namhlanje nendlela intshukumo yolutsha ebizwa rap: ulutsha ukhangela iindlela zabo yokuthetha yehlabathi embilwini. Kwaye abo ukuphuhlisa iintsingiselo ezintsha kwimizobo yesihobe, kunye nabo fan Classic ulwalathiso yemibongo namhlanje kubaluleke kakhulu ukwazi ukuba yintoni na ezi zandi kulwimi Russian.

cross-nemvumelwano

Uninzi isihobe ibhalwe ngendlela yokuba nemvano ngababini, imigca wokuqala nowesithathu, kwakunye yesibini neyesine. Ukuba ukhetha ugqabazoQXml jike nokwakheka kwezitanza ukudibanisa amagama, izicengcelezo, ngoko siyakhamnqiseka yinyaniso ilandelayo: i arc phambana, ngokungathi ekusekeni emnqamlezweni. Yiyo loo nto kule meko ibizwa ngokuba "cross-rhyme." Ivesi othi "Reflections on eselunxwemeni lolwandle" ukunceda umzekelo sihlolisise le ndlela versification.

Reflections on eselunxwemeni lolwandle

Andikwenzi - loo nto ama bekhala,

Kwaye ndiye kubulisa abasishiyayo ehlotyeni,

Hayi igama lam wamnika ukukhanya ...

Ulwandle kubhenca iimpendulo

On lo mbuzo: "njani phila?

indlela ephila into noko amnye ebantwini?

Njani ukuba abone kuzo zonke ubuxoki uhanahaniso?

Ukuze siqonde intliziyo enezinto

iintlungu imithi, ingqumbo kunye kwamathandabuzo?

Indlela yokulawula ukuphepha iimpazamo

Ke amakhulu amawaka izigqibo

Athembekileyo, ukuze ufumane impendulo ngqo? "

Kodwa, wadinwa ngokulila, tu

Ingabangaba. Ulwandle ebiwe bubuthongo.

Kwaye ke iimpendulo ngeenaliti hay,

Ningandifumani, kuba Inceba kaThixo.

Amadoda, abafazi, kunye giperdaktilicheskaya isicengcelezo dactylic: ulwazi ngokubanzi

Apha, ku quatrain ngamnye (vesi, eliquka imikrozo emine) wasebenzisa cross-rhyme. Amaninzi, ngoko zonke quatrains ngokubhala umbongo ethile mnye, usebenzise enye eziliqela iindlela imvano-zandi; nokuba zonke imigca iphele ngo iisilabhili wagxininisa (rhyme obudoda) okanye yonke imigca kukho imvano ngakumbi, xa uxinezeleko iwela lwegama ongamphambi kokugqibela koKuhlala, okanye enye ngababini yiRhymed Isitishi has isicengcelezo oyindoda, kwaye isibini nezinye - imazi. A rhyme encinane azixhaphakanga dactylic xa umtya iphela kunye iisilabhili ezimbini unstressed, ezo inophawu impembelelo. Yaye kunqabile kakhulu ukulawula ukuhlangabezana giperdaktilicheskuyu (iPIN okanye pentasyllabic) imvano-siphelo, xa lwegama wagxininisa kulandele iisilabhili ezintathu okanye unstressed ngaphezulu. Sebenzisa zonke iinketho ngaxeshanye kumbongo eyodwa - amila.

Amadoda, abafazi, kunye giperdaktilicheskaya isicengcelezo dactylic: lihlaziya kumzekelo

Kumzekelo elinemifanekiso ngaphambili nje umkhondo amadoda, abafazi kunye nemvano- dactylic umnqamlezo indlela ngobuwena yokuba. Hi xikombiso, le quatrains zokuqala nezokugqibela kukho ukusetyenziswa kuphela izicengcelezo obhinqileyo, kunye phaya kwisitanza sesibini umgca wokuqala nowesithathu ifaka imvano esobukhomokazi, kwaye eyesibini neyesithathu - dactylic. Le quatrain wesithathu ngumzekelo usebenzisa indibaniselwano obhinqileyo-obudoda isingqisho. Enyanisweni, apha inkqubo isicengcelezo umnqamlezo wavakalisa Ababa, apho unobumba omkhulu limela imvano esobukhomokazi, nabancinane - eyindoda.

semvumelwano phakathi

Oko kwenzeka njengoko umnqamlezo zilurhangqile imigca rhyme ngokufuthi kangangoko imvano-siphelo. Kule ndlela, lo izibongo yokuqala edityaniswe umgca yesine, kwaye eyesibini - nowesithathu. Ngokomzekelo, Belting, yaye kwelinye - ring imvano-siphelo, ingasetyenziswa apha ivesi "Owu umama" imibongo:

Yini na? Nje encinane ukuba:

Mangeni izandla ukushwabana ...

Ngaba abayi bazi ukuba nesithukuthezi,

Forces ukuze zihlale zona akukho ukhetho.

Njengoko sibonile kumzekelo apha isicengcelezo umkhondo kwi imiqolo yokuqala neyesine (ubuncinane - ekhohlo), kwaye eyesibini neyesithathu (izandla - nesithukuthezi).

Kanye njengokuba umnqamlezo, isicengcelezo zifakwe apha ukuze iinketho amadoda, abafazi, kunye giperdaktilicheskoy dactylic, kunye nendibaniselwano zayo. Amaninzi olu hlobo isihobe lisetyenziswa sonnets, yaye phantse never - in Russian iintsomi kwimibongo. Kuba okokuqala kwabonakala ngenkulungwane ye-18, ekupheleni kweli thuba versification syllabic. Bukela kube lula ukuba uAntiochus Kantemir yakhe "Ileta II kwisihobe sakhe."

Umphunga kwisihobe isicengcelezo labantwana

Ukuxambulisana ngendlela ukongeza kwimibongo, singasathethi ke rhyme zomphunga. Kanye njengokuba lo msesane kunye umnqamlezo, isingqisho umphunga kwenzeka ngokufuthi kwisihobe Russian. Le yeyona ndlela kakhulu elula neqondakalayo nefikelelekayo yesihobe, yiyo lonto le ndlela inkoliso izibongo esibhaliweyo abantwana. Oku kuquka patters kunye Ukubala, namaqhina ezininzi.

Umzekelo, amaqhina loo vesi esibhaliweyo rhyme kwisibini:

Yena - inqanawa eshushu ndiyihlanganise ndiyidadise ngalo mba.

Kwaye le umphezulu ogudileyo - akukho imibimbi abakwazi ukubona!

okanye:

iindlebe Long, umsila elifutshane,

Esiseleni, yena uhlala ezintofontofo, kunye ndithule.

Umbongo ezaziwayo-kakuhle malunga Tanya, uphose emlanjeni ibhola, exhaswa ngu Agniya Barto, ibonisa nje ukusetyenziswa kwe-rhyme isibini. Kunye neminye imibongo, umzekelo, malunga yenkomo, ophezu ephangweni waya kulala ebhokisini, ibhere sleepy, ulogshegosya ebhedini, yaye malunga indlovu ngubani akafuni ukulala, bevuma intloko yakhe aze athumele imibuliso yakhe indlovu.

esigaba Onegin

Ngokuqhelekileyo, yonke imisebenzi imbongi ubhala kwenye, indlela yakhe umnyulwa, esebenzisa nokuba umsesane okanye isibini, okanye umnqamlezo-rhyme. Kodwa Pushkinym Aleksandrom Sergeevichem ithiwe thaca kwi-ihlabathi uguqulelo yantlandlolo, leyo imbeko lakhe igama "Kwisitanza Onegin," njengoko wayebonakele ngayo imigca yokuqala inoveli "Eugene Onegin". Ivesi Onegin ibandakanya quatrains amathathu kunye couplet lokugqibela. Apha, kwenye yemibongo zakhe zifumaneka umsesane nangoko imvano-siphelo, igumbi umphunga, umnqamlezo. Le ndlela usaphila kule mini, kwaye maxa wambi ababhali imisebenzi zesihobe bhekisa kuyo ukuze ziqhakrazise ukuvakalisa iimvakalelo zabo neengcinga.

Njengomzekelo ke singathatha ivesi "mama" ngokupheleleyo omnye quatrain esele wabancina umzekelo ujikeleze isicengcelezo nje.

ngomama

Andiyilibali kutheni mna ekhaya,

Musa ukulibala ivumba nonina.

Mama, ndathenga ube rose!

Mama, Uxolo, nto kakhulu emva kwexesha ...

Yini na? Nje encinane ukuba:

Mangeni izandla ukushwabana ...

Ngaba abayi bazi ukuba nesithukuthezi,

Forces ukuze zihlale zona akukho ukhetho.

Amehlo akhe, kanye oqaqambileyo oluhlaza,

Bukela nge photo - bloklo blue ...

Hair, gorgeous, ezintle,

Thinned, waba ezingwevu ...

Wena SILINDELE kum apha embundwini -

Nje kancinci emva kwexesha I ...

Kuhlahlelwa quatrain yokuqala, kucacile ukuba ababandakanyekayo ukubhala ngomphunga isicengcelezo. Nakuba kunjalo, kufanele kuqatshelwe ukuba kukho kusetyenziswa assonansnaya isicengcelezo apho ngezandi kuphela izikhamiso, kodwa musa uyavuma.

Eneneni, igama elithi "Ikhaya" kunye "lweenkobe" Ekuqaleni, zicwadi kunzima ukubiza imvano-siphelo. Kodwa igama elithi 'ekhaya' izikhamiso zokugqibela unstressed Libambe indawo ebuthathaka II, ngoko kunikeze nokuphungulwa isandi "b". Igama elithi "lweenkobe" yenza isandi efanayo unobumba "o" endaweni zaudarnoy. Ngokufanayo, ungenza phandle igama elithi "roses" kunye "emva kwexesha". Noko ke, le isicengcelezo abasebenzi eqhelekileyo "z" lwamaqabane.

Le quatrain yesibini kuye kwaqwalaselwa yi kuthi ngasentla: yona ingalandwa umbhinqo okanye rhyme azifakwanga. Xa quatrain wesithathu kusetyenziswa cross-rhyme. Nokuzaliswa Kwisitanza Onegin, njengoko kufunwa yi isimbo couplet ekhethiweyo.

Apha yinto entsokothileyo - ukubhala umbongo. Kodwa ukufunda ukukhetha imvano-siphelo ekunene, khetha indlela kwimibongo, iphatheni zesingqisho nga bagcine nkqu irobhothi. Kodwa ukutyala imali inxalenye imveliso umphefumlo wakhe - kuba phezu kwamagxa hayi ukuba wonke.